The Art of Positive Critiques http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/forums/68 en-us Copyright 2006, Yuku feeds@yuku.com (FeedMaster) webmaster@yuku.com (WebMaster) Thu, 08 Apr 2004 08:09:36 GMT Yuku Feeds 1.0 http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/tech/rss 60 Yuku http://static.yuku.com//feed/bypass/images/button-yuku.png http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/forums/68 Yuku - free hosted forums and profiles 88 31 {pics-1.1 "http://www.icra.org/ratingsv02.html" l gen true for "http://yuku.com" r (nz 1 vz 1 lz 1 oz 1 cz 1 ) "http://www.rsac.org/ratingsv01.html" l gen true for "http://yuku.com" r (n 0 s 0 v 0 l 0 )) Search Search Domain q http://yuku.com/search/direct/ <![CDATA[ Starting story ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/666/t/Starting-story.html feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/666 Sun, 04 Apr 2004 14:28:45 GMT <![CDATA[ How to make the story interesting? ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/664/t/How-to-make-the-story-interesting-.html :( :( feeds@yuku.com (Moonlight sunshine) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/664 Thu, 01 Apr 2004 11:47:51 GMT <![CDATA[ Need beta reader for a Frank-Solo story ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/663/t/Need-beta-reader-for-a-Frank-Solo-story.html
I have been working on this story for quite some time and I think the first few chapters should be done by next weekend. I may be jumping the gun here but I need a beta reader as I've never written in this style before. It's a Frank Solo story thus Joe is quite out of the picture. Thus, Joettes may find this story very boring.

A teaser- this is a prequel to Homecoming and Psychdelic Hollow. I may do one on Joe and Elle but I think I'll write this story for Frank... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/663 Thu, 01 Apr 2004 03:51:46 GMT <![CDATA[ Quoting lyrics--all please read ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/667/t/Quoting-lyrics-all-please-read.html
Here is a guide to help you know if something might be Public Domain
 feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/667 Fri, 26 Mar 2004 06:16:48 GMT <![CDATA[ Help! ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/669/t/Help-.html Beth
Staff Member
Hardy Detective Agency


 feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/669 Wed, 25 Feb 2004 13:21:40 GMT <![CDATA[ Need beta-reader- Non Hardy Boys short story ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/670/t/Need-beta-reader-Non-Hardy-Boys-short-story.html
ANy takers?

Thanks!

Ocean
]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/670 Sat, 03 Jan 2004 10:12:22 GMT <![CDATA[ Critique Welcome on "Leverage" ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/662/t/Critique-Welcome-on-quot-Leverage-quot-.html
]]> feeds@yuku.com (Hyena Cub) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/662 Sun, 14 Dec 2003 15:03:46 GMT <![CDATA[ Christmas Cheer--the deadline approaches ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/675/t/Christmas-Cheer-the-deadline-approaches.html Christmas is almost here.

We have an opportunity to reach out and help some children who are could use a little extra help making this season jolly.

Even a small donation of a just a few dollars will make a big difference to a child.


1. Contact us at for a family to adopt
2. Send a check and our personal Santa will shop for you
3.... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/675 Tue, 09 Dec 2003 08:53:28 GMT <![CDATA[ Beta-Read for An Affair of the Heart ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/674/t/Beta-Read-for-An-Affair-of-the-Heart.html :lol Email me at Gsdshade@aol.com and tell me what I need to format the story in. It's 8 pages long now, so I might add another page or two before it's finished.
AKA... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Anita88) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/674 Mon, 08 Dec 2003 12:52:50 GMT <![CDATA[ linking the chapters ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/676/t/linking-the-chapters.html
The only advice or criticism that I have is when the sites are posted, make sure the links to the next chapters are correct. I've just found this site, and I'm going through the stories alphabetically by author. In just about every story there's at least one link that's wrong. For example,... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (shee) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/676 Fri, 05 Dec 2003 22:12:56 GMT <![CDATA[ Please critique Psychedelic ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/671/t/Please-critique-Psychedelic.html
Ocean ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/671 Thu, 04 Dec 2003 03:46:56 GMT <![CDATA[ Let Freedom Ring (To Don) ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/673/t/Let-Freedom-Ring-To-Don-.html -Al (the weird)
]]> feeds@yuku.com (Hyena Cub) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/673 Fri, 07 Nov 2003 23:01:50 GMT <![CDATA[ Age of brothers? ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/677/t/Age-of-brothers-.html AKA GSDShade
"Trust me." -Indiana Jones, Raiders of the Lost Ark. ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Anita88) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/677 Mon, 03 Nov 2003 08:51:51 GMT <![CDATA[ Need help with grade school/ pre-school ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/678/t/Need-help-with-grade-school-pre-school.html


]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/678 Sun, 19 Oct 2003 03:58:57 GMT <![CDATA[ Opinions- Writing Technics- Songs ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/668/t/Opinions-Writing-Technics-Songs.html
www.fanfiction.net/column...olumnid=55

Without much ado, it's about some fan-fiction writers tendencies to incorporate music lyrics into their works.

Well, I'm guilty of it. In Seekers, in Falsehood (where I refined it a bit and had the choice... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/668 Sat, 18 Oct 2003 05:49:59 GMT <![CDATA[ Help with new story ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/679/t/Help-with-new-story.html "Even the nicest people can have a mean streak" - Vicki Silver ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Victoria Royale) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/679 Wed, 15 Oct 2003 18:59:44 GMT <![CDATA[ A Really Neat Name Site ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/660/t/A-Really-Neat-Name-Site.html
www.20000-names.com/index.htm
~~Nancy~~
Editor, The Bayport Gazette

Friendship is a contract signed in... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (Nancy) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/660 Mon, 06 Oct 2003 15:08:59 GMT <![CDATA[ Need Beta! ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/680/t/Need-Beta-.html
I've been working pretty hard on my ND/HB story lately, but things have hit a bit of a hiccup. I've written a scene, and really need someone to read over it for flow, characterization, and suggestions on how it can be strengthened. Anyone volunteering should have strong grammatical skills, and not be squicked by the possibility of Nan/Frank 'ship. =)

Also, if anyone will be available in the next couple of weeks to beta the first six or seven chapters before I post... ]]> feeds@yuku.com (HRHMrsBrown) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/680 Fri, 19 Sep 2003 20:36:30 GMT <![CDATA[ A little Fantasia in Hardy Boys ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/681/t/A-little-Fantasia-in-Hardy-Boys.html feeds@yuku.com (Unregistered(d)) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/681 Fri, 12 Sep 2003 23:50:51 GMT <![CDATA[ Opinions on Title; PLEASE! ]]> http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/682/t/Opinions-on-Title-PLEASE-.html feeds@yuku.com (Anita88) http://hardyboyschatzone.yuku.com/topic/682 Thu, 11 Sep 2003 17:43:41 GMT